Learning Plan Powtoon

Fictional Character Cronical

Nisse

A mythical man

His bumpy beard

His old skin

His loving heart

His mystical magic

He lives in a cottage in the lost woods of Norway with wolves bears and foxes,

He is eating porridge as he grows old helping the animals and caring for your homes . . . if you give him porridge with butter, and as Jul (Christmas) comes closer he is make sure he looks after all the animals.

By: Lily

I was learning to write a descriptive piece of writing in a different way.

We wrote about any fictional character that we knew and wanted to. I wrote about the Norwegian Santa Claus. After we wrote the story we got to make the character on a google drawing and this week we are making the setting for our awesome magical characters. I might need to improve on my alliteration and metaphors.

Taste Tummy Rubbing Tangelos

 23/2/17

                                         Tangel🍊s

“Crack” as I peeled the delicious tangelo revealing the scrumptious segments. The smells reminded me of springs delightful wonders. One whiff of the smell and I was in love with what it's smells may bring to the flavors. Gently I placed it in my mouth and wow I wanted more and more it was amazing. Juicy orange tasting segments as tiny as they were, they were delicious I wish I was eating them forever. One by one I ate the segments and ripping their flesh.“SHHH” as the juice squirted out of the tangelo segment as my teeth squished it. I never thought I that a round orange ball would be that tasty. I love tangelos sooo much, “I glad I have a tangelo tree at home!"

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I was learning to write a descriptive piece of writing.

We wrote about a tangelo we got to smell, taste and feel it. I thought I was a great way to write a story. I worked on the similes and alliteration and onomatopoeia. But I need to work similes because I really don’t really know much about them. Other wise I think I did really well.

I Remember . . .

Tuesday 7th - 8th February 2017

I Remember . . .

Lying on the warm rocks of Russell

As the ocean breathed in and out tickling my tiny toes.

Listening to my sister laughing as the sea birds pecked away at her lunch.

SQUACK!! The bird whaled as Teah chased them into the cloudy sky

Then comes Amy sprinting across the hot tar road.

Suddenly comes a splash of refreshing sea water as Amy jumps to the ocean.

Looking up to the shimmering sun as it warms me once again,

Thankful that the sun was shining that day.

That was my summer

   

I was learning to notice and use a structure of a piece of writing to write my own descriptive writing.

I had to start with what we were doing,

Something that was happening,

Something we did and why we did it

Then we figured out the rest of the structure of our stories.

I thought I did the beginning well by putting ‘lying on the warm rocks of Russell,’

It is my most descriptive piece of writing so far in all the years I have been at school.      

Cool Christmas Menu

The is my menu for Christmas. All of this is made up and what we want to have.I am going to show my family and ask if we can really have this.

Endemic Birds of New Zealand

This is my Native Birds slide. We did reading projects about birds of NZ and birds feeders.

My Breleant Bird Feeder

This week for Oral Language we presented a bird feeder that we designed. My one is a rounded cage filled with flowers for the nectar birds and a perch.